Response to part one: someone making a difference

My doctor for my arthritis has really made a difference in many people's lives. Her name is Bernadette McNally. She is really nice and really cares about her other patients. Bernadette is one of the leaders for a study for arthritis in the U of U hospital. Her, and two other doctors, are trying a new technique to get rid of arthritis sooner. They want to stop it as fast as they can so that it wont damage your joints as badly. I think Bernadette is doing a great job.
I think, maybe, one day she will find the cure to arthritis. Bernadette is a great example to the world because she wants to make a difference. In the article it said that we are getting too lazy and that we ignorant so we are not learning as much as we could, it also means we don't really feel like doing as much as we could for others either. Not Bernadette, she is doing everything she can to try to help people with arthritis. She keeps learning more and more to find out what else she can do or what she can do better. If we all follow her the world would be such a better place.
Bernadette has really made a difference to me and influenced me by doing her best to make me feel better. She tried to get rid of my arthritis as fast as medically possible. I really appreciate everything she has done for me, and I'm sure her other patients feel the same way. I hope we can all learn from her so that we can also make a difference.